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21/10/2015 00:03:37

InsaneHamster
InsaneHamster
Posts: 272 		As promised. The debut of The Gone Forever Tree
A tourist on vacation is threatened by a lion. Lucky for him a rabbit is willing to help him out.

Based off the short story of the same name written by Phillip Marten

Hyena- Dmitrij Botin
Rabbit - Cherelle Renee Childs
Lion - Martyn Luke
Tourist - Rick R. Miller

The Gone Forever Tree song by
Laura Doeden and Tim Murrow

Modeling by
Urbanlamb
Fazz68
Teresa Fisher

Thanks for Watching
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21/10/2015 19:22:28

ziggy72Muvizu mogulExperimental user
ziggy72
Posts: 1988 		Nicely done, but I'd do it faster paced make it shorter - 10 minutes tops. You don't really need the second time he goes for the stick either. Might sound odd, but it needs less, I would say. Also, you could put a rabbit shaped nose/cheek model on her and she'd look less human. Would the cat face mask work with the bunny ears? See, you got me thinking now...

PS Feel free to ignore me, I just assume if you post a vid on the forum it's because you want feedback.
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21/10/2015 21:46:55

InsaneHamster
InsaneHamster
Posts: 272 		ziggy72 wrote:
Nicely done, but I'd do it faster paced make it shorter - 10 minutes tops. You don't really need the second time he goes for the stick either. Might sound odd, but it needs less, I would say. Also, you could put a rabbit shaped nose/cheek model on her and she'd look less human. Would the cat face mask work with the bunny ears? See, you got me thinking now...

PS Feel free to ignore me, I just assume if you post a vid on the forum it's because you want feedback.


I am always looking for
quality feed back Ziggy. So thank you. I tried to keep it with the original story that was written. Which
was very short. I tried allkinds of things for the
rabbit and wasn't having
much luck. But I did learn a lot from this project.
From auditioning voice to
better camera placement.
Thank you for the feed back.
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01/11/2015 12:47:49

Tangledbliss
Tangledbliss
Posts: 66 		Enjoyed it - I liked the use of video of the wildlife - maybe a little slowish for the opening titles. I would have aimed for maybe 10 mins and cut out one of the searches. Nice music, set, lighting and overall ambience.
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